his rough hands
smothers her velvet skin
unable to break free
she shivers in fear and disgust
using all her might
she pushes him back
running for her life
is all she can do
like a starved savage beast
he pounces on her
whilst she screams in agony
he tries to find pleasure
her eyes filled with tears
she looks for compassion in his eyes
but none she can find
as he gives an unmerciful glance
all out of chances
all out of hope
she stares at the blank wall
lying helpless in bed
1 comment:
:-( That's sad.
As for constructive criticism-Loved it till the last line. Maybe you should try rewording it for more impact.
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